Apartment from Newbie
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Model:SU7
Render:Vray for SU
Render Time:1'37"
Dimension:3200(px)x2400(px)
Background added by PS
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any comment..?
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The modeling is excellent, very clean and I like the drapes in the windows and however the render needs some life... shrubs in the foreground, potted plants on the balconies, or maybe a tree off camera to cast a shadow on the road. A car on the road may help as well as something to reflect in the windows - for example trees or buildings off camera. The material (stucco?) is a bit too flat and clean, and the brick columns should have a limestone or concrete top instead of brick.
Good start, these are just ideas, meant to help you make a good render look great!
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Hebelup,
I think the modeling is clean but there are a few issues.
The curtains are all the same and the repetition is obvious. That is one thing that will stand out right away. Try tweaking them to make them all a bit different.
The scene needs far more vegetation so the building does not look to just be dropped on a concrete pad.
Try to show a view that shows the entry to the building. It looks odd that there are no ways of entry from this angle.
The background does not blend to the scene.
Some cars and people are needed to give life to the image.
As said before the building is too clean.
The yellow stripes are too bright and draw your eye away from the building.
The composition/view is too close to the building and does not show how the building affects the surroundings.Your on your way but the image still needs some work.
Scott
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