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      xrok1
      last edited by

      here is my first go at overlaying lines. its a style i've admired for a long time but havn't had the nerve to try till now, since i've gained a lot of confidence since Twilight has become my render choice. ๐Ÿ˜„
      any tips to improve the technique would be appreciated.


      renderPP.jpg

      โ€œThere are three classes of people: those who see. Those who see when they are shown. Those who do not see.โ€

      http://www.Twilightrender.com try it!

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      • EscapeArtistE Offline
        EscapeArtist
        last edited by

        Very subtle. I like it quite a bit, well done!

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          xrok1
          last edited by

          ๐Ÿ˜„ thanks.

          โ€œThere are three classes of people: those who see. Those who see when they are shown. Those who do not see.โ€

          http://www.Twilightrender.com try it!

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          • dermotcollD Offline
            dermotcoll
            last edited by

            Hi Xrok1

            That style really pops the image - I am not experienced in PS so PP will need to wait till I get the basic rendering sorted - well done on a great first effort at PP.

            When you burn your arse - you gotta sit on the blisters!!

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            • olisheaO Offline
              olishea
              last edited by

              nice work....but generally line overlay should be lower opacity (unless you want a bold outilned effect), i think its a bit too much at the moment. but i guess its a matter of personal preference. great work anyway. what material did you use for the fridge and spot lights? look great

              oli

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                billet323
                last edited by

                I would have to agree with Oli... although it really does look really good... Id personally like to see a hard surface for the counter... Not a big fan of wood edging... but thats a personal thing! Keep up the great work ๐Ÿ‘

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                  tinanne
                  last edited by

                  I really like this it's VERY nice. The only thing throwing me off is the grass outside the glass door. 1. the color and 2. You can see the cut off of the plane. Distracting from a very nice interior setting and style. Ok and 3. I think the eye level should be lower. Other then really, it's so nice!

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                  • EarthMoverE Offline
                    EarthMover
                    last edited by

                    Really nice Rocky! I too would lower the opacity and selectively erase the overlay from certain areas to further blur the line between PR and NPR.

                    3D Artist at Clearstory 3D Imaging
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                      xrok1
                      last edited by

                      thankyou all, maybe i'll play with it some more, but i was so happy with even pulling it off at all that i dared not tweak ๐Ÿ˜†

                      as for the outside... ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ahhhhhh!

                      maybe i'll play some more after i'm actually done with this reno, i'm about half way through and its starting to feel spooky when i walk in there and it feels sort of like i'm in a SU walkthrough! this is the first project i've done with so much detail (thanks to the encouragement here) and it is really weird to be so familiar with a finished project that's not even finished yet. if you know what i mean? ๐Ÿ˜•
                      it almost feels like i'm building a replica! ๐Ÿ˜†

                      โ€œThere are three classes of people: those who see. Those who see when they are shown. Those who do not see.โ€

                      http://www.Twilightrender.com try it!

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                      • dermotcollD Offline
                        dermotcoll
                        last edited by

                        I feel like that every time I do a kitchen / home office - the only thing is I need to become colour blind as my renders are sh1t compared to the finished article!!!!

                        When you burn your arse - you gotta sit on the blisters!!

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                          david57
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                          Nice work. I like the design on that wooden table.

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