Thomas' WIP

[7homuz]

finally finished a design for class which started in september and finished this morning (after a 14 hour marathon in front of the computer )
I have handed it in already, so I'm looking for some C&C, especially on the 2 interior renders (thanks to Majid's tutorial!)

im going to use the model to experiment with more rendering and i'll post those up here as well, cant stop rendering =D
thanks!

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[Ecuadorian]

100x better than anything I presented when I was in college.

In my humble opinion, the renders could use a bit more exposure.

[7homuz]

thanks, i was aiming for an effect between the darkness inside and the natural lighting, but I will certainly need to pay more attention to exposure =D

heres another one i fooled around with today

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[sepo]

Yes , quite descent presentation. The last image is very attractive.

[7homuz]

thanks sepo, i was just admiring your renders in the point and shoot thread, amazing!

I am cooking a photoreal version of the entrance at home right now...hopefully i will get some feedback on improvements as my photoreal skills are.......well, theres none to speak of xD

[7homuz]

i think i'll be posting a lot of my WIP on here eventually so i'll just change the name accordingly.

my comp got turned off while i was at school so i had to re-render, here it is at 1 hr 20 mins

i've upped my exposure Ecuadorian ;]

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[tomsdesk]

Wow...another winner! Every style here is done quite well, Thomas...great!

[dermotcoll]

Excellent work Thomas.

I erally like the way you blend the line drawing with the rendered images - very impressive work. I look forward to seeing more of it.

[7homuz]

thanks for the compliments guys, i appreciate it!

heres an attempt again on a PR render...but it just doesnt seem right and i cant figure out why???

for starters i noticed the materials are off and need some bump and stuff....what is that secret ingredient i am missing?

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