House project

[alpro]

Not a bad render but I think the color of the pencil is off a little, also the size of the pencil and cup aren't relative, either the cup needs scaled up or the pencil down. I really like these types of renders.

Mike

[Gaieus]

But what if the cup is a shot glass?

I also love these "scale model renders". Isn't it a bit dark however? (Maybe just because of the background...)

[alpro]

I suppose it could be a shot glass

Mike

[asirad]

Thx for comments. I will do some corrections and I will post new version.
I did not study architecture (that is my hobby) and English is not my native language but I have question about glass. What does it mean shot glass? Do have some tutorials about glass in SU and VRay (other then manual) because I always have problems with glass. Maybe you could post some glass material or scene with glass and material? It would be nice to have example and make some experiments.

[Gaieus]

That's not about a certain glass material but about what you drink from it. Generally small portions of hard liquor is called a "shot" - because you drink it in one gulp.

Sorry for misleading with the Off-Topic note

[asirad]

Thank you. I'm understanding now

[olishea]

haha I was gonna say thats very soloesque (new artistic style there pete)

yeah I agree about the pencil, its huge!!

you need some tea in that cup...if you are an english scumbag like myself!

nice work

[asirad]

I did some changes. Background stays dark. I changed cup to shot glass Pencil is smaller and color is better. What do you think now about image?

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[Gaieus]

I liked the other one, too - but yes, the pencil looks better now.

(And of course, the shot glasses!)

[EarthMover]

Looks like the architect had one too many, never finished the project, and turned his attention to a shrink ray.

[olishea]

yeah man lose the shot glasses, i think u took comments too seriously! I think u need to bump the pencil, paper and wood surface, looks very CG at moment. nice concept though haha