Habour - schoolwork

[huyvuvn]

this is my schoolwork: the habour,
C&C are welcome
cheersss,

[solo]

A job for a drunk framer.

Looking great, cool project.

[rcossoli]

EXELLENT
very good work, my favorite: 2º image

[alex luu]

oh, a good project man!
thank for posting!
that is beautifull!

[ENG. YASEEN]

It's a great work Huyvuvn

[linea]

Stunning work, I love the retro style of your layout sheet.

[lucifer1101]

Stunning, can i ask how long you have been studying for this?

[mateo soletic]

Huyvuvn,
Great work , well done.

[zumo]

I like it alot

[majid]

nice renders ... and which renderer do u use? v-ray seems to be...

[huyvuvn]

@majid said:

nice renders ... and which renderer do u use? v-ray seems to be...

thanks for comment,
of course, I use sketchup for modelling.

I use vray 1.5sp2 for max 2009.

cheerssss.

@rcossoli said:

EXELLENT
very good work, my favorite: 2º image

@solo said:

A job for a drunk framer.

Looking great, cool project.

@zumo said:

I like it alot

@mateo soletic said:

Huyvuvn,
Great work , well done.

@eng. yaseen said:

It's a great work Huyvuvn

@alex luu said:

oh, a good project man!
thank for posting!
that is beautifull!

thanks

@lucifer1101 said:

Stunning, can i ask how long you have been studying for this?

time for studying depend on yourself About me, I learn v-ray on some days, less than a week, but I need many works and projects to train and improve my skills.

@linea said:

Stunning work, I love the retro style of your layout sheet.

the hand-drawing board is my main project, not the render "the habour" is project of 2nd year. in vietnam, the 2nd year student can not use computer , must use hand drawing.

[huyvuvn]

today I update some render ^^

[honoluludesktop]

Nice concept. Consider making the framing lighter, and increase the variety of spaces between the vertical elements. The execution of the platform and roof plane clashes with the free form nature of the curtain wall. Not necessarily bad, but perhaps something you can exploit as a design theme. Don't forget that you are doing Architecture first, and its presentation second. Nice renders too.

[holmes1977]

wow nice renders

The only thing that I feel needs changing is the catamaran.
You wouldn't normally have a catamaran at sail that close to the shore/mooring/dock.
If you pull the sails down it would give a little more realism.
I'm probably being picky. Its just that the rest is perfect.