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    • K Offline
      kwistenbiebel
      last edited by

      This is getting better and better.
      My only remark, and you pointed it out yourself already, would be that the most important ball is blending too much in the background.So I would change its color (eightball black? / a golden ball?) or change the background color...

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      • GaieusG Offline
        Gaieus
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        Change either the background or the white ball green. Altogether it would make perfect Hungarian colours---
        ๐Ÿ˜„

        But seriously, green is always the colour of Christmas, too. Evergreens are the symbols of eternal life (therefore the ivy for the dead or the pine for Christmas).

        Green is also the colour of a pool table.

        Gai...

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        • K Offline
          kwistenbiebel
          last edited by

          Gaeius referred to a pool table....

          Why not making a nice 'green fluffy pool table surface' as background and keep the silver ball?

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          • marked001M Offline
            marked001
            last edited by

            yeah....maybe i'll try it.. i kind of dig the white reflective surface though..maybe i'll try the ball as green.. right now, with it being silver, my logo is blending anyway... i'm working on one now with an orange ball (my logo is orange)... but i'm having difficulty with the mapping in maxwell ๐Ÿ˜• maybe i'll try to project it on in sketchup to make it a little easier. thanks guys!

            http://www.revision21vis.com

            instagram: revi21on

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            • FrederikF Offline
              Frederik
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              It's very interesting to follow this development...
              Could be fun - if you care to share the SU model - to see what render results others would be able to achieve... ๐Ÿ˜‰
              I can only imagine what Solo and Kwistenbiebel could make with their artistic skills... ๐Ÿ˜„

              Cheers
              Kim Frederik

              Cheers
              Kim Frederik

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              • marked001M Offline
                marked001
                last edited by

                ..are you crazy?? i dont want them showing me up!! haha..

                http://www.revision21vis.com

                instagram: revi21on

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                • marked001M Offline
                  marked001
                  last edited by

                  ugh...getting little to no help on this in the maxwell forum ๐Ÿ˜• might have to figure something out in sketchup ๐Ÿ˜•

                  http://www.revision21vis.com

                  instagram: revi21on

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                  • marked001M Offline
                    marked001
                    last edited by

                    ok..figured out the mapping of my logo...BUT..now i dont really seem to be getting the highlights i got in my initial test ๐Ÿ˜• same HDRI, same material, and same settings.. kinda frustrating.. and i dont get it.. guess i need to play with the materials more ๐Ÿ˜ž

                    here are a couple more test... the red is looking alot like the orange on the logo ball, so i tried changing it up..i dunno ๐Ÿ˜•

                    http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2121/ballsrackrev1bfw0.jpg

                    (changed the reflectance in this one to try to get some highlights....)

                    http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4425/ballsrackrev1ckd6.jpg

                    http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/2332/ballsrackrev1dxp9.jpg

                    http://www.revision21vis.com

                    instagram: revi21on

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                    • boofredlayB Offline
                      boofredlay
                      last edited by

                      The middle one is very good IMHO. Maybe add some holly in there and you are set.

                      http://www.coroflot.com/boofredlay

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                      • soloS Offline
                        solo
                        last edited by

                        I like last one, but swop colors having red balls and one green one.

                        http://www.solos-art.com

                        If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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                        • marked001M Offline
                          marked001
                          last edited by

                          the middle one is kinda cool..i agree...especially next to the other two that are really FLAT! not really sure what is going on, but my original file..which has the exact same settings all around (materials, environment, etc) still renders with the highlights..like the other image..so i've pulled that back out and replaced some of the objects with the new ones..and it seems to be rendering correctly now.. no idea what is up with that? but anyway..i'll have an update shortly.

                          hmm..ivy..not a bad idea.. trying to keep this really clean, but i might try that ๐Ÿ˜„ thanks eric.

                          http://www.revision21vis.com

                          instagram: revi21on

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                          • marked001M Offline
                            marked001
                            last edited by

                            ok.. here is an update..(no level changes in pshop) whatta you think?

                            http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/9223/ballsrackrev1xjf6.jpg

                            taking eric's cue, and running one now with a bit of evergreen off to the left.. not really sure on the placement..maybe it needs to be on the right..

                            http://www.revision21vis.com

                            instagram: revi21on

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                            • soloS Offline
                              solo
                              last edited by

                              I like it.

                              It says a " i am an individual"

                              how about adding ore reflection to the logo ball so that it shines brighter than the rest, this time giving the message, i am an individual and i am brighter than y'all.

                              http://www.solos-art.com

                              If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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                              • marked001M Offline
                                marked001
                                last edited by

                                yeah..i might try changing the light source to the right to highlight that ball more.. its defintely lacking...

                                here's one with some evergreen.. not feeling it though..crappy composition..

                                http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/3815/ballsrackrev1x2pg6.jpg

                                http://www.revision21vis.com

                                instagram: revi21on

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                                • soloS Offline
                                  solo
                                  last edited by

                                  Actually it may just work if you made he logo ball green, the image would have balance.

                                  http://www.solos-art.com

                                  If you see a toilet in your dreams do not use it.

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                                  • K Offline
                                    kwistenbiebel
                                    last edited by

                                    Don't be shy...This really looks better and better.
                                    I like the glossy reflections on that last one.
                                    Have you thought of using depth of field to get the emphasis more to the 'special' ball?

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                                    • marked001M Offline
                                      marked001
                                      last edited by

                                      gonna mess with this a 'little' more... but its really been keeping me from my 'work' this week..haha.. i did really want the logo ball to be different.... it was supposed to be orange, but ended up way too close the red..and i like the red balls too much to make them another color ๐Ÿ˜• i will give the DOF a whirl..and maybe try moving the branch to the lower right..i suck with composition...oooooorrr..i might just leave it like this and keep it simple ๐Ÿ˜‰ added some hooks ๐Ÿ˜„

                                      http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/6026/ballsrackrev1x3lr5.jpg

                                      http://www.revision21vis.com

                                      instagram: revi21on

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